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Many Voices

Thursday, February 12th, 2004

This is a part of Aaron’s comment to a recent post I wrote.

“Weblogs present such a great opportunity for inspiring young writers. That alone makes them worthy of consideration. When you add the ‘perspective of many voices’, it becomes a great learning opportunity as well; to expand one’s awareness and see reality from different perspectives. That can be beneficial for everyone!”

“That alone makes them worthy of consideration” is a phrase that has been running through my mind ever since Aaron wrote it. This is so true and I can give you a perfect example that emerged today as I was working with my Wrinkles group.

To give you a little background, SuperThinker has been busy visiting many weblog sites over the past months. She has visited my students’ sites many times and the support and reinforcement she gives them has really helped them and me. She is my team weblogger who gives my students the audience they need to let them know that their writing efforts do not go unnoticed. She has been busy as a beaver setting up another fifth grade class to share idiom weblogs, our Idioms Are Fun! and their Ms. P’s 5th Grade Bloggers: WE’VE GOT A WORLD OF IDEAS! Now, today my students began welcoming these fifth graders to the world of weblogging by lending them a hand by coming up with idiom sentence to complement the work one of Ms. P’s students had created. Notice how the community keeps building.

Now, I started off with Aaron’s post because his comment that “weblogs do present such a great opportunity for inspiring young writers” that has been running through my head inspired me to work even harder with my young group of writers. Notice how the community connects and encourages.

My next post will be dedicated solely to Emily, who wrote a piece on idioms today that needs to be celebrated. I had asked them to think about things going on everyday and write a story full of as many idioms as they could use. Now, I had modeled a short story for them last week and this is not an easy task. Getting the story to flow, make sense, and have just enough details to make the idioms make sense is no easy task but Emily rose to the occasion! She chose to write about SuperThinker, her new weblog friend who is honoring Emily’s voice as well as sharing her own voice. Notice the many voices that are combining to support this wonderful young writer…….

Fifth Grade Voices

Friday, February 6th, 2004

Those who had a little extra time in my Wrinkles group yesterday posted their thoughts about weblogs. These students are fifth graders. I thought you might enjoy hearing some student voices.

Derrick says weblogs are the newspaper of the Internet…..

Once I heard about this assignment, I knew what to say about it. Weblogs are fun to write about things in the news and you also get to have fun with IDIOMS. We do assignments and when we come back we write down our homework on our weblogs. Weblogs are a great experience for people to learn and get better at writing. Do you like to write LOOONNNGGG stories? Weblogs are good for sharing information you learn about in the news or in schools and libraries.When we come to Mrs. Davis’s class, we have discussion going on in the room and we think of things that are really important in the news or whats happening in schools. You can learn from other people if they have weblogs. “It’s the newspaper of the internet.”

Now what do you think about weblogs?

Yoceline shares her weblog with her uncle…..

What do you think about weblogs? I think they are great. You can just have your own web where you can write your own ideas. I love weblogs. I have my own weblog and I really enjoy it. I hope I can have a weblog next year. Do you have a weblog?

Weblogs helps people with their vocabulary. It also helps you express yourself. I share my writing with my uncle. He thought it was great.

Emily is “all ears”…..

Once I heard this assignment, my response was on the double! I absolutely LOVE WEBLOGS!!! The webloging experience for everyone is so great for education subjects, or of course to share your feelings. Ms. Davis’ group allows me to really express my feelings about the subjects on the news and my side of the story. You might think that you can just write it down on paper and have the same effect. If you have a weblog though, you can write AND get a response from other viewers.

What do we do in weblogs? In the weblog group, we start off the day by meeting together and taking up our homework. Our homework is usually writing a story off a report from a news site and making a really thought-provoking question at the end. Next we talk about what our day plan is, and go off to the computer lab to go weblogging!!! YAY!!!

We usually start of by typing our homework, and then responding to our responses of our posts. Many people out in the world just can not even imagine what it feels like to get an uplifting response to our stories!!! After our cheers from our responses, we find a new report that we enjoy reading about on some interesting news sites for our homework.

After all of this, at 10:30 (sometimes longer), our time is up and we pack up our stuff, and go back to our classrooms. I really wish our day was longer, so our class can keep on learning!

Remember Ms. Davis, I am all ears!!!

Jennifer tells me she is “tickled pink about weblogs”…..

I was on the ball the first time Mrs. Davis gave an assignment to the class. I am glad I get to have this experience again. This will help me learn new skills in writing good descriptive paragraphs and techniques to narrate stories better. I am very delighted that I get comments from friends, family, and from other people as well. What do we do in our weblog group you ask? Well first off, Mrs. Davis gives an assignment the week before. Then we come in and discuss what is on the agenda that day. Next we go to the computer lab and find an article. These are a few steps WE do to start writing:

1 Read your article.

2 Take a high-lighter and mark the important parts.

3 Think about the article.

4 Tell someone what you are reading about.

5 Think about descriptive words to make you writing interesting.

6 Be sure the who, what, when, where, and, why are included.

7 Make sure the lead of the article is catchy.

8 Write your article.

9 Think of a catchy title.

10. Read article outloud to yourself.

11 Proof article yourself.

12 Ask someone else to proof it.

13 Make corrections to make it better.

14 Reread it one more time!

We do this for about an two hours.(8:30-10:30) I really hope students and teachers will get inspired and follow our footsteps from the beginning to the end!


Yes, Writing Does Matter!

Tuesday, January 6th, 2004

I love this book, Because Writing Matters, that I am rereading for the umpteenth time. I know I have talked about it before but I wanted to share a few things I read today.  First, two quotes that are great:

“Teachers can have students write to discover, create and explore their thinking, dig up prior knowledge, to cultivate intellectual independence, to conjecture about possibilities, to struggle with difficult concepts, and to engage the imagination as an ally in learning.”


 

from Tom Romano, Clearing the Way: Working with Teenage Writers

 

“Many state writing assessments run the risk of undercutting good writing by scoring only for focus, organization, style, and mechanics without once asking judges to consider whether the writing is powerful, memorable, provocative, or moving (all impact-related criteria, and all at the heart of why people read what others write.)”

 

from Grant Wiggins, Educative Assessment, p. 67

 

Take a look at the key points in the book. This book is a must read for those interested in the teaching of writing. Any of you administrators out there - Chapter 6 - “What Administrators Can Do to Create Effective Writing Programs”- is really good.  Hear, hear, Tim and Joe! :-)

Focus on Writing

Monday, January 5th, 2004

It puzzles me that we are discussing the worth of Weblogs as a writing tool. In education, I think that is the main worth of weblogs. It is a tool we can use with students to make writing THE focus. It is truly a unique tool that teachers can use with students. It is a quick, easy way to give them writing practice. It gives them an audience, ownership, and that needed writing practice that gets lost in today’s schools. We can make it fun for them and help them discover that their writing matters.

Writing is hard. Doing it well means being both a writer and reader. I still find it a daily struggle to find the right words to say what I mean, and to say it clearly so others understand. Not only clearly but in a way that makes the reader want more. I know I fall short most days, but I plan to keep working at it. Weblogs give me a place to get that needed practice. Some days I really feel good about what I write, other days I don’t. That’s OK. Weblogs give me a place to really think about what I am learning, a place where I can learn from others, and a place to think about how I can take that learning and make a difference with students.

If writing is hard, teaching writing is even harder. Our challenge is to keep working at ways to make it relevant to the students, to let them develop topics that matter to them. and to help them gain an understanding of the value of writing. Weblogs are unique writing spaces. It’s up to us as teachers to set the stage for this learning environment. That’s the hard part. Good writing won’t just occur because they have a different place to write

Maybe it as simple as rethinking these unique writing spaces. Students don’t write a lot, do not enjoy it, and most view it as a chore. Can weblogs change that? I think yes but we have to put the focus on writing, not the writing spaces.

Educational Parallels

Wednesday, November 19th, 2003

Zephyr Teachout is the director of Internet organizing for the Howard Dean presidential campaign.

Baseline’s article, “The Marketing of a President” says the following:

Teachout is a key architect of one of the most effective marketing efforts in the history of national politics, and the most sosphisticated online camaign to date. Using a variety of Internet tools, from the electronic journals known as weblogs to social networking sites, the Dean campaign has propelled the Vermont doctor from near-anonymity to the front of the Democratic pack aiming to replace George W. Bush as chief executive of the United States.

The lessons of the Dean campaign do not just apply to politics.

I find this fascinating reading but find myself making, or maybe I should say hoping for, educational parallels as I read. Granted a political campaign holds far greater interest than educational issues but how can we effectively heed the lessons they are learning and then in turn put the focus on education?

With the Internet, an effective capaign creates a community that will on its own begin to market your product for you. Properly done, you won’t be able - or want - to control it.

The trick is to turn the buyers on a product, concept or candidate into evangelists, willing to take action on their own to spur demand. And the recrutiment doesn’t have to cost much.

The payoff is a powerful multiplier effect that turns anyone into a potential campaign worker.

OK, we have seen the educational use of weblogs increase this year but maybe we need to think a little harder about what we want to celebrate as more educators enter the arena. When you get right down to it, a weblog is a space on the web where teachers and students can write. And then, publish quite easily! If we educators, make sure there is an authentic audience that is willing to take the time to comment, we can in turn open the door for having a purpose to write and a reason to want to make the writing better. Then critical thinking on issues is a logical follow-up. I use the word celebrate because that’s how I view our job of helping to foster that student voice. My question is how can we work at creating a multiplier effect that gets more students involved in this process?

The two most effective tools for Dean have been a Web site that allows users to set up meetings with individuals of similar interests, known as Meetup.com; and the easy-to-use online diaries known as weblogs, or blogs.

Making these tools widely available via the Internet, reather than husbanding them at campaign headquarters, means Dean’s marketers give up a fair amount of control of messages made on behalf of their candidate.

Teachout says this spreads “ownership of the campaign,”

It’s time for us to give students ownership. We have to be willing to take the risks of giving them a voice so we all can have a dialogue - I think that’s teaching at its best and if we don’t do this, who will? We get the joy of helping then write and think as they learn to be a responsible, thinking, well-informed citizen.

The blog itself is not about getting votes, it’s about activiating people to get votes.

Educational blogs are not about getting web spaces, it’s about how we use those web spaces to get kids writing and thinking.

A key way of carrying on a campaign-wide converstion is the comment area on Blog for America. More than 100,000 comments have appeared on the weblog since June 10.

If the campaign can’t handle the volume of comments as it grows, how will it get meaningful impact from the conversation?” (The staff admits they don’t know yet, but they’re working on it.)

The parallel for us is that we don’t know yet either and we’re working and thinking about it. We sure don’t have those numbers so here is where we can learn from them. I’ll be following that thread.

The whole is smarter than the sum of its parts, says Johnson. Teachout wats to know what the parts are thinking.

In the end, the weblog gives the candidate, his staff, and all the people in the field a chance to conduct something like a clueful conversation.

Indeed, we have parallels here. Never before have we had a chance for such clueful conversation. The question is, where do we go from here?

The common theme of all the technology used by Dean, says Rowe, from the weblog to the wiki, an information pooling tool that lets staffers post reports on media coverage of the campaign, is a focus on building community.

Let’s keep building our educational community. Let’s keep finding others and keep on sharing all we are learning and thinking. We can make a difference!

Zephyr Teachout has no interest in technology for technology’s sake. “We want the simplest, dumbest tools we can get,” she says. The idea is to get people working, not to dazzle the,, and to get their feedback on what could be done better as quickly as possible.

That’s what we need to remember. I think we will get lots more educators on board if we just keep it simple. I am still in awe of how much you can do with a weblog in which students and teachers are writing, posting, thinking, creating, and responding on subjects they care about. Yep, keep it simple! It works!
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Weblogs: A Perfect Place for Student Writing

Thursday, July 17th, 2003

Most Writing Scores Up  is an article about writing that caught my attention. 

The nation’s fourth-graders and eighth-graders have become better writers, but fewer 12th-grade students can convey well-organized ideas, a new national assessment shows.

Even the signs of improvement must be considered in context: Most students in the three benchmark grades still can’t provide coherent answers with clear language, supporting details, accurate punctuation and creative thinking.

The new report provides a sense of how well students can write essays, communicate information and compose arguments — skills considered essential for success in college and the workplace, yet some educators say writing has become the forgotten fundamental.

“By the time students graduate high school, they should be able to produce more than disorganized self-expression or Internet chat,” said Marilyn Whirry, former national teacher of the year and a member of the board that oversees the national assessment.

“It is the responsibility of every teacher to lead students in their struggle to become writers.”

I have been thinking about this article for the past week. While I certainly agree that it is the responsibility of every teacher to lead students in their struggle to become writers, that is just too simplistic of a statement to suit me. We know that, but we also know that in order to become good writers the time to practice and pursue that is critical.  The statement that some educators say writing has become the forgotten fundamental really hits home.  We all need to think about ways to make every teacher a writing teacher.  (Hey, how about weblogs?)

As I grapple with my thoughts about the process of writing, I keep coming back to giving students ownership as a key factor. I love to hear my students talk about what they do and don’t like about writing. I learned so much from the group I worked with this year. Listening to their insightful comments and watching them struggle through the hard process of writing a good piece is what teaching is all about. I like to think of writing as a tool for learning.

Usually good writing would come in our groups when we had lively discussions about things they cared about. That’s another key factor - writing about what is of interest to them. 

Weblogs are such a perfect place for students to reflect on their learning, discover gaps in their knowledge, and make connections between what they are learning and what they have learned. I’m working on a handout for using weblogs for “Writing to Learn” that I can use for future projects/workshops. I am going to focus on ways the weblog writing can be used to help in this whole writing process. This can range from quick writes to longer, more structured writing assignments. I think it might be helpful for those just beginning to discover weblogs to think about ways to use them with their students. 

Weblogs give ownership plus an audience.  That’s the third key factor - someone caring about what they write. They know their teacher cares but when other students and interested readers comment, you can feel the electricity in the air.  Students sit up and listen.  They are engaged.  You can see the wheels turning.  It’s a dynamic writing place where the writing is alive and inviting.  Your writing is out there and causes others to react.  Wow!  You just can’t get that kind of ownership so easily in the classroom. 

Yes, writing is fundamental!  In the hands of good teachers, weblogs can be the gateway for teachers to give students ownership, a forum to discuss issues they care about, and an arena that has an audience that cares about what they are writing.

Writing to Learn

Tuesday, May 27th, 2003

I’ve been following the discussions between James Farmer, Greg, and Will on student publishing and privacy. I really like using weblogs in education, particularly in the area of writing across content areas. I like to think of helping students learn to use writing as a means of clarifying their thinking. I like to think of it as a place for them to be heard and a place on the web to raise the bar on student writing, put a little fun into the process, and help students feel the joy of seeing their writing improve.

Now I have just worked with elementary students so their reactions may be different but somehow I think not, at least not on this one level. The level I am talking about is when students realize that their work will be judged by someone else. It is one thing to have nice comments and suggestions - who doesn’t like that? But what if someone says your writing is not good and needs improvement. This can be a very intimidating thing for children. I experienced this with my elementary group at the beginning of our collaboration with Will’s journalism students.

A bundle of mixed emotions really described them. They wanted to hear from the older students on how they were doing with their writing but after seeing the long news reports the high school students had written, they were on an emotional shutdown. They were very nervous and afraid and were quite sure that they could never measure up. These students taught me a lot and gave me a golden opportunity to talk with them about the purpose of a collaborative effort between students for the purpose of helping them improve their writing. These students were having an opportunity to work on real-life writing skills that could be so worthwhile in just about any area of their life! I think this is a perfect area for two teachers to work together with both groups. The skill of giving constructive comments while reviewing a draft someone has written is not easy, but oh what a great skill to teach our students. We must teach those critiquing how to make suggestions that provide solutions. (Guess what, they’re learning, too!) Plus, teaching our students to receive these constructive suggestions, learn how to think about the suggestions, decide if you agree or disagree is something that will be of value to them for a lifetime. Letting them know that they can disagree and having the dialogue with your group is an essential part of the process. The key is to communicate with your students about the process, make sure they are OK, and then give them the support they need as they continue on their writing/learning journey. I don’t view this as an area where you grade students, this is the learning journey where they are getting the practice they need to become better writers. It’s like having suggestions and help from many, rather than a few. All of it is right there in one place for you to think about to improve your writing.

All this said, I am so glad this discussion is going on as there is much to think about. It is imperative that we communicate with parents and let them know what the process is so they can be a part of it, or at least understand the process.

I know there is a lot more to think about in the area of student publishing on the web. I am still thinking and I know it’s not so simple as all this but I do think we are on the edge of some major thinking shifts in our teaching and how to use weblogs in the most sound educational form to truly make a difference with students. Now more than ever we teachers need to listen to our students as we tread in these new writing spaces. If students are a part of the dialogue from the beginning, I can’t help but think that the students very own writing will help supply some very good answers.


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How Does Writing Affect Learning?

Friday, May 16th, 2003

I read an interesting article this morning (via MiddleWeb). How does wriitng affect learning? A review of the research by Robert Bangert-Drowns, Marlene Hurley, & Barbara Wilkinson.

MiddleWeb says: This  brief paper on the onnections between writing and student achievement summarizes a review of 45 studies that compared normal classroom instruction to writing-intensive instruction on the same content. Key finding: “When writing prompts urged students to reflect on their learning processes - the challenges they faced and the strategies they employed - the educative effects of writing were substantially improved.” (From “English Update,” Spring 2003, National Center on English Learning and Achievement.)

I like the focus on getting students to reflect on their learning processes. I tried to do that with my NewsQuest student group as we wrapped up the year.  This is crucial for them to make connections to their learning and to improve.  I think this is one of the reasons I love weblogs so much - a space for students to write, reflect, and think.  I want to keep striving to keep the focus on writing tasks that will stimulate thinking, both for myself and the students.

I’ve always believed that teaching writing was one of the most important priorities for teachers, regardless of what content area you teach.  I’ve also seen the teaching of writing go by the wayside as more and more demands are put on teachers for accountability based on one achievement test!  It’s not that teachers don’t realize the importance of teaching writing,  they do!  However, because of the time required, many times writing gets put aside.  This is frustrating and alarming!

Other relevant blurbs from the article:

What appears to matter more than the amount of time given to an assignment is the nature of the writing task, the kind of thinking that gets done. One factor reliably enhanced the effect of writing-to-learn: When writing prompts urged students to reflect on their learning processes - the challenges they faced and the strategies they employed - the educative effects of writing were substantially improved.

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In general, these studies and other research suggest that writing can benefit learning, not so much because it allows personal expression about subject matter as because it scaffolds metacognitive reflection on learning processes. And the cost need not be great: even relatively brief tasks can boost learning. Additional research and classroom investigation should further clarify how writing benefits learning.


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