Archive for March, 2005

Patrick Update

Friday, March 4th, 2005

I wish you could have seen Patrick’s face yesterday. He was overwhelmed and could barely speak. It was really something as I watched him carefully read every comment. From time to time, he would look up and tell me something that was said. It took a while. Patrick is a slow, careful, methodical learner. He has to have time to process and I could feel his total amazement that this many people had cared. He had 12 responses to his “Fifth Grade” post. All of the responses were absolutely wonderful I’ve posted about this before here and here.

Now Patrick is on a mission - he is working on a draft to respond to each and every person who wrote to him. Of course this is going to take some time and both his teacher and the ITS at the school will help there by giving him the time he needs to do this. Think about what he’s learning. He has to read and reread. He selected something from each comment to post about and to think about how that affected him and put it into words. He is hard at work on his writing skills so he can communicate what he wants, proof his work, and many other things that only Patrick could share with us.

Now this is something that most elementary students would cave under as it’s quite a comprehensive writing project to undertake. Yet, Patrick wants to do this and will indeed go that extra mile. Wow! I’ll keep you posted!

Yesterday was one of those days that you know why you teach! And yes indeed, I know why I blog with students!! Those great moments in the classroom are just magnified in such incredible ways!

Reflections from a student

Friday, March 4th, 2005

This comes straight from one of the students in my “Teachers & Technology”

class.  She was writing her midterm reflection. I’m pulling one

excerpt because it’s a good example of information overload and some

good that can come out of reflecting about what you are doing. I won’t

point to her blog just yet as she just might forget to breathe.

Already, I have progressed from getting completely lost in the

terminology to realizing that, while I may be causing the glitch, it is

repairable. I now know what address I need in order to blog and what

address I need to read others’ blogs. I can navigate and compose and

even risked placing graphics within my website. Once I learn the

correct way, it gets so much easier. It’s still taking me an incredible

amount of time to understand where I’m going wrong but hopefully the

learning curve, while initially steep, will start to level off.

I am still not doing much differently with technology outside of this

course since I don’t have much opportunity for that, plus I am spending

so much time just completing assignments. I am feeling more confident

and was amused the other day when the subject of blogging arose and I

was the only one in my circle of friends that had a clue what that was

about. I may become the IT expert in my social circle by the end of the

semester.

I have developed one pedagogical strength from this. Before, having always been at the top

of

my class in my endeavors, I had wondered how I would handle the

challenge of teaching a struggling class of students. Last week’s

scenario that involved turning in the incorrect Lesson Plans coupled

with no memory of being shown how to access Documentation made me

realize that one can truly become so overwhlemed that one cannot hear

what is being said. I knew theoretically this happens to students and

having now experienced it, I think I’m better prepared to empathize and

(as you did) help them get over the sensory overload and back on track.

So, Mrs. Davis, continue to inspire us and power point us in the direction we need to go. We will blog and navigate as well as we can with hopes of composing a great final product. Will we improve–only our rubrics will know. You’re teaching us well and if we look faint–just remind us to breathe.

I’m getting

some good reflections from this class. We need to start these type of

reflections in elementary school and continue them in middle and high

school. It’s amazing information and helps us connect on the learning

journey.  Blogs are perfect for that.
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Borrow a Writing Tool!

Wednesday, March 2nd, 2005

    If I Were a Carpenter: The Tools of the Writer by Roy Peter Clark of Poynter Online

is an article worth reading. The author says it helps him to think that

writing is like carpentry. He can work from a plan and use the tools he

has stored on his workbench. He goes on to say that readers can borrow

a writing tool whenever they like. The kicker is you don’t have to

return it. You can pass it on to another writer without losing it. He

lists 20 writing tools he has borrowed from reporters and editors, from

authors of books on writing, and from teachers and coaches. He gives

brief descriptions of how to use the writing tool but encourages us to

build our own collections.

This would be a great springboard to use with our students. His tools

fall under 4 catergories: sentences and paragraphs, language, effects,

and structure. Just the wording of the tools could be a great writing

lesson. Talk about having fun with language…. Check these out:

  • Observe word territory. Do not repeat a key word within a given space, unless you intend a specific effect.
  • When tempted by cliches, seek original images. Make word lists, free-associate, be surprised by language.
  • For clarity, slow the pace of information. Short

    sentences make the reader move slowly. Time to think. Time to learn.

    See what I mean?

  • Strive for “voice,” the illusion that the writer

    is speaking directly to the reader. Read the story aloud to hear if it

    sounds like you.

  • Place gold coins along the path. Don’t load all

    the best stuff high in the story. Space special effects throughout the

    story, encoruaging readers to find them and be delighted by them.

 Now that’s just 5 of

20 writing tools so read the rest. It’s good writing and makes me want

to build collections with students.

I have issued a challenge to

my Write Weblog group. I think we can perhaps adapt it to fit our

writing on blogs by students. Add to the collection!  Yet another

way to have fun while learning and writing on blogs!!

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More elementary student bloggers on the scene!

Wednesday, March 2nd, 2005

I received an email

form Gordon Brune today that made my day! More elementary student

bloggers are entering the blogging world! Hooray! Gordon is a 4th grade

teacher at Mamaroneck Avenue School in New York. Here’s his email:

Hi!

I have admired your blog(s) for

some time now. In fact I am emulating your blogs — albeit

not as well!. Check out our first-step attempts at

http://landmark-project.com/blogmeister/blog.php?blogger_id=251

I am truly realizing the need

for an audience (as you posted about awhile back). I would like my

students to check out your students’ posting and comment on them. But I

see that they will need to input an email address. My students do not

have formal school email accounts. What do you suggest I do?

Have them use my email address?

Look forward to hearing from you.

Gordon Brune

I would say that he is doing quite well with his first-step attempt and I can’t wait to hook his students up with mine.

In case you’re wondering how I answered his email question here’s my reply to Gordon:

Hi Gordon,

Thank you

for your nice comments about my blogs. I am going to spotlight this on my blog!

(http://anne.teachesme.com)  It

is exciting! I am so happy to see a fourth grade teacher implementing this! I have

done it now for three years with fourth and fifth graders. They can really

become good writers and thinkers! It≠s ironic to hear from you today because I

meet with my students on Thursdays √ they will be doing news reports tomorrow.

They would love to hear from your students. I will have them comment to your

students tomorrow. My group does  have real email addresses but they do

not use them. In order for them to be an author of a typepad blog they have to

have an email address so we provided a school one but they do not actually use

them.Let me

explain how we get around the email address for commenting with the entire

school body. Your students can post a comment without having a

real email address. This is what we do. We tell students to use first names

only and they use this bogus email address: Griselda@mahanmail.edu, jane@matelingmail.edu, Thomas@henningmail.edu, marcos@toblermail.edu

Now the

first part is the students first name, then mahanmail is their teachers last

name and mail

It works for

us!

I would love

for your students to reply to my students. All of my student blog links are on

the left side of The Write Weblog (http://itc.blogs.com/thewriteweblog).

The

audience is really empowering for the kids!  Now, I must get back to

reading your kids≠ blogs!  Great work, Gordon! Let≠s keep in touch!

Anne