“I Cannot Be Charted”
Monday, July 12th, 2004This doesn’t come from a weblog but I hope Traci Carpenter will create one because I like the sound of her voice! The July 12th issue of Newsweek featured an essay, “I Cannot Be Charted” by Carpenter, a senior at Michigan State University. She was the winner of an essay contest for college journalists sponsored by Newsweek and MTVU, MTV’s college channel. She eloquently explains the youth vote.
I talk with a lot of the students on campus here at Georgia State and much of what she says, I’ve heard in one form or another from the students here. I don’t find them to be uninterested or uninformed, but they really do sense a lack of true caring from the politicians of today. Many have become jaded at a very early age.
Listen to some of Traci’s words:
“Everyone has a theory as to why I don’t vote, but no one really asks me.
I am neither lazy nor apathetic. I’m confused and frustrated.
I cannot be accurately represented by percentages and statistics. I cannot be graphed and charted. I am not a Democrat, Republican or other. I’m a mixed bag of experiences and influences, and no one can predict how I will vote when I do vote.
I don’t know the difference between President George W. Bush and Sen. John Kerry because they don’t take time out from kissing babies and the behinds of corporate executives to tell me. Anyway sex scandals, wars based on false pretenses and broken promises have left me cynical about all politicans.”
Then she said this about Howard Dean’s campaign:
“Howard Dean tried to change my mind about the political process. He made me a part of his campaign, rather than a target. He recognized the power I hold, rather than ignoring my potential.”
That made me think back to a major change that I saw in the students’ attitude about the political process when Dean was a part of the equation. Dean really made them feel he cared. He involved them. He listened to them and respected them. I saw hope and excitement in their eyes. The students were passionate about his campaign. They EVEN contributed! They were invited to comment on the weblogs. Input was sought.
Traci closes with:
“I am not a dark knight. I will not ride in on my horse come November and steal the election for one candidate or another. I don’t know if I will even really vote at all. But I do know that I am 48 million strong. And if someone would just reach out to me - not during election years, but every day - I would show them overwhelming support at the polls.
I am the youth vote.”
I’ve read Traci’s essay several times. What a great lead! What a great closing! I’ve got to hold on to this essay because it is a good model for teaching writing. I love to find good writing pieces and really examine them and discuss them with students. I know my kids would have thought this was a great writing piece.
I’d like to see more good examples like this where students are writing what they are really thinking and giving reasons for their thinking. Actually, that’s where weblogs could really shine. Let’s work hard to get more student voices on the web so their potential will be unleashed.
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