Archive for February, 2004

Writing Persuasively in a Digital Age

Tuesday, February 17th, 2004

via <The Blog Herald>

 “Professors blog away in the classroom” is a Stanford Daily article written by Andrew Hendel.

Excerpt:
“Program in Writing and Rhetoric (PWR) Lecturer Christine Alfano said that she thought it was fitting to incorporate blogging into her E-Rhetorics class because of the class≠ focus on electronic rhetoric and digital media. For her class, students post a message once a week about their research or thoughts on the material.”

The professor is requiring the students to blog at least one entry per week and is asking the students to keep it somewhat course-centered (i.e., reflecting on issues of writing, rhetoric, digital culture, PWR, etc.). She has given them some latitude to include entries more dedicated to their personal, political, or social interests. More details on the specific requirement for the blog are listed here and the specifics for the final course reflection are here.  The blog counts for 5% of the couse grade.

I find it interesting to see how different professors and teachers are setting up guidelines for student blogging.


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Update on ESL/EFL Weblog Session

Monday, February 16th, 2004

We’re on week 4 of the online session, “Creating and Using Weblogs in ESL/EFL” and participants are checking out free weblog software programs.  Some of you had expressed interest in that part, so go to week 4, “Creating our Weblogs”.

Last week Jeanie, one of the participants in our online session was going through the process of our week 3 assignment,  “Weblog Think-Abouts.” Jeanie writes:

“It was so exciting viewing over the list and the ideas that it
started running through my brain. The list of things that you can
do was so helpful and really will give me a lot to think on as I
prepare my weblog.

I am thinking about writing and having children write from our
school on different subjects. This will give children more
encouragement to write more and work harder on their own studies.
This weblog could sponsor good writing and
other students could participate by commenting on the written
stories.

I think this would be simple way for me and even the students to
start learning about weblogs and at the same time spotlight the good
writing from our students at my elementary school.

What are your thoughts?

Do you think this will work?”

I sure do like Jeanie’s thinking as she is focusing on writing for students.  Other participants, like Agata, are seeking answers to collaborative blogs.  Agata wants these features in her weblog:

- several users able to post, edit, change and comment on the posts
- pictures
- list of useful links (again: created by multiple users)
- email notification of new entries
- possibility to add voice messages
- “private” option, for members only

We have a chart created by Aaron comparing the different features on some of the free weblog software programs. Here’s the link to the syllabus.

Nancy had an excellent response and shared her experiences with Tabulas. Be sure to see Nancy’s post about Tabulas.

I’m finding that while I do like Manila, there are many good features to many of these free sites. It’s great to have the time to explore them a bit more.  I’m sure we’ll learn more as the discussion continues……


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This one’s for Emily!

Thursday, February 12th, 2004

This post is a celebration of good writing by Emily, one of the students in my Wrinkles group.  She wrote it in honor of SuperThinker!  It’s a story full of idioms!  Hope you enjoy!

 

Once opon a time, there was a great super hero, busy as a beaver helping the World Wide Web blog. It’s SUPERTHINKER!!!! Using only hi-tech equipment, she never buys a pig in a poke.

 

One sleepy day, Superthinker heard a yell for help, so soaring through the air she heard the cry for help once again. She was all ears, “Aha” she said spotting the distressed blogger. “Help!!!!!!!!!!” She heard again but landed next to the blogger in distress. “HOW IN THE WORLD DO YOU CHANGE THE BLOGS BACKGROUND SUPERTHINKER!!!” The Blogger screamed, attracting attention. Right then, Superthinker knew the blogger was chewing up the scenery and making a mountain out of a molehill. Then Superthinker told the blogger what to do in a nutshell. “Don’t worry, it’s a piece of cake.” She then was interrupted. “But I heard through the grapevine about all of this complicated nonsense!”  See you press this button and do this.” Thank you so much Superthinker! I didn’t mean to make waves!!!” the blogger said while taking his hat off. “Also don’t think you have to shape up or ship out to be a blogger, Rome was not built in a day you know!” Superthinker added, as she zoomed off. The blogger was on cloud nine and was tickled pink.

by Emily

Many Voices

Thursday, February 12th, 2004

This is a part of Aaron’s comment to a recent post I wrote.

“Weblogs present such a great opportunity for inspiring young writers. That alone makes them worthy of consideration. When you add the ‘perspective of many voices’, it becomes a great learning opportunity as well; to expand one’s awareness and see reality from different perspectives. That can be beneficial for everyone!”

“That alone makes them worthy of consideration” is a phrase that has been running through my mind ever since Aaron wrote it. This is so true and I can give you a perfect example that emerged today as I was working with my Wrinkles group.

To give you a little background, SuperThinker has been busy visiting many weblog sites over the past months. She has visited my students’ sites many times and the support and reinforcement she gives them has really helped them and me. She is my team weblogger who gives my students the audience they need to let them know that their writing efforts do not go unnoticed. She has been busy as a beaver setting up another fifth grade class to share idiom weblogs, our Idioms Are Fun! and their Ms. P’s 5th Grade Bloggers: WE’VE GOT A WORLD OF IDEAS! Now, today my students began welcoming these fifth graders to the world of weblogging by lending them a hand by coming up with idiom sentence to complement the work one of Ms. P’s students had created. Notice how the community keeps building.

Now, I started off with Aaron’s post because his comment that “weblogs do present such a great opportunity for inspiring young writers” that has been running through my head inspired me to work even harder with my young group of writers. Notice how the community connects and encourages.

My next post will be dedicated solely to Emily, who wrote a piece on idioms today that needs to be celebrated. I had asked them to think about things going on everyday and write a story full of as many idioms as they could use. Now, I had modeled a short story for them last week and this is not an easy task. Getting the story to flow, make sense, and have just enough details to make the idioms make sense is no easy task but Emily rose to the occasion! She chose to write about SuperThinker, her new weblog friend who is honoring Emily’s voice as well as sharing her own voice. Notice the many voices that are combining to support this wonderful young writer…….

Weblog walk with the students

Tuesday, February 10th, 2004

My favorite walk where weblogs is concerned  is the one with the students. I began to range out of control last week with my Wrinkles group. Let me tell you why. I have three students in that group who were also in last year’s NewsQuest group. They look forward to writing and want to be challenged. They have really learned how to reflect about their own writing. They care about the issues in today’s world. They like weblogs because it gives them a voice and they feel that someone out there is caring about their voice. It’s a new feeling and it is empowering. They want to make a difference. They take great joy in helping all the other students who are new to weblogs this year. I’ve seen them stop what they are doing time after time to help a peer struggling through a new learning step on the weblogs. They want these students who are new to weblogs to learn to love them as much as they do.  Sounds like some of us, right? They just know their peers are going to see the power of writing and they are so enthusiastic with each other! They keep asking me if they will be able to do this in middle school, which is where they are headed next year.  I tell them, I hope so! 

Watching them interact teaches me so much and lets me know what I need to focus on in my teaching.  Anyway, my group of three have decided that they want to tackle an issue and report about it on the weblog.  This is what made me range out of control. They want to investigate and support reasons for keeping art, music, and physical education in the school curriculum.  They talked about interviewing teachers, researching the issue, and maybe even getting together something good enough to send to our legislators.  These students have gotten wind of the fact that our Governor and legislators may give classroom teachers a 2% pay raise but this pay raise may come at the expense of art, music, and PE programs.  The students are alarmed and want to express that. What really thrilled me is that they truly get the academic importance of art, music, and PE.  They are ready to explain that and are going to try to put this together in some way that will get their point across.  The final thing that just really made my day is that they are willing to do this outside of class.  Soar, soar, soar!  Hey, these kids are truly representative of their school mascot, the eagle.  Eagles don’t flock, they soar! 

UK Political Weblogs

Tuesday, February 10th, 2004

The Guardian Unlimited has a list of the best current political weblogs - from left, right and centre.  I like Tom Watson’s blog because he actually writes it himself - a true blogger.  I hope I can find some more like that in this comprehensive list. Of course, these are from the UK but I will add them to my growing list of political blogs.  How they use blogs tells a lot about them, don’t you think?
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How to teach about educational weblogs

Monday, February 9th, 2004

I have been walking this “weblog” country for a couple of years. Jill’s post plus some of the reactions from the participants in the ESL/EFL online weblog session have got me thinking again about how to effectively teach weblogs. I’ve concluded that I don’t know the best way, and probably never will but I am going to keep on trying because I think it is heading us in a direction that is eventually going to make some needed changes in education.

Teaching about weblogs is so interesting and yes, so hard. It’s not a one shot thing. Seeds have to be planted and time provided for thinking about it. I’ve seen many educators who just can’t see possibilities with it. It is a little disconcerting at first. It is not a way that educators traditionally teach or communicate. Their immediate reaction seems to be one of trying to make it fit into something they already know. They want to convert it to a “regular” web page and don’t see how. Then they view it through one lens like a list of links, assignments, or random thoughts and they immediately toss it out as being of no value to what they do or want to do. Some equate it with teenage diaries and can’t get past that. Then some complain about the writing that their students do on the posts or comments. That is the one complaint that does bother me because that is where the role of a good teacher comes in- our golden opportunity to use it as a teaching tool. We have to be willing to take the time to make sure that weblogs are used to make authentic and exciting connections to what we are teaching. We have to get the kids excited, show them possibilities, and work at getting them excited about caring enough about what they write to produce a good product. That’s our job, our challenge, and our joy. It’s not a place to just turn them loose and expect good results. It takes hard work on a teacher’s part - teaching! It’s a place to oversee, guide, and help them see the value of writing. It’s working at giving them ownership but all the while raising the bar. Yes, student and teacher, working together to try to make it better.

Then there are others though who quietly observe what is going on by viewing other educational weblogs. They think about how they might apply it. They’re not sure just how to go about it but they are interested and they are thinking. They are not quite sure if they want to put their thoughts out there in this manner. It is a little scary. They are hesitant. They want to join in and their minds are open to possibilities. They need time and a mentor to be there to help and let them know that all of this is still a new animal in the field of education and we are all learning together. It’s OK; in fact I think it is good to take risks to make learning more exciting and relevant to today’s students. I also can’t help but think that as more and more of us are exploring weblogs in education, better and more effective ways of teaching about it will emerge.

Another group, although small, are those that just jump into the mix and get very excited about weblogs in education. They share their experiences and try to get others interested. They are risk takers and will charge forward into new areas and we will all learn from them.

I’m sure there are other groups. I think I fit into the second group when I first began. My first experience with weblogs was recording the journey of learning when I was teaching a group of fourth graders about palm pilots and how to use them in their learning in their reading classes. I had no idea about how to make it interactive but as I was logging the journey I was also busy searching the web for other examples. I was lucky to find some good examples, which I just continued to read and think about. They were my mentors. Then I just dove in and started blogging. Sometimes I am still startled that I writing my thoughts for any to see. I never imagined such a venture but it is great. It is hard work but the rewards are many - both with networking with other educators and especially the sharing of the learning with students!

One thing that weblogs do offer us is the perspective of many different voices and this is so needed for all of us educators. It’s our voices. That’s hard to get in another avenue. Plus these voices are unchecked. I may not like what some say. I may be exhilarated by what others say but I can take it all as more food for thought and keep on thinking about how to broaden the educational weblog community. I am going to try harder to get this important aspect across in my training sessions.

Having a door open to a greater community of learners is such a wonderful thing for educators. We can learn, we can grow, and we can listen to all these voices and emerge the better for it. So can our students.

Walk this country

Sunday, February 8th, 2004

Jill Walker’s weblog is absolutely one of my most favorite ones to read. I love following what she is doing in her classes. I love reading her writing on different topics. I learn from it and just enjoy it. Today she talks about explaining blogging to the “interested but ignorant.”  She ends up with this:

“And there it is. There’s all this, and more. And it’s quite impossible to show in 45 minutes. I don’t know how to convey it. You need to walk this country to see it.”

That should whet your appetite to read the entire post. You do indeed need to walk this country to see it.  I wish more would jump in, but better yet, hang in there a bit to see all the wonderful possibilities.


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Fifth Grade Voices

Friday, February 6th, 2004

Those who had a little extra time in my Wrinkles group yesterday posted their thoughts about weblogs. These students are fifth graders. I thought you might enjoy hearing some student voices.

Derrick says weblogs are the newspaper of the Internet…..

Once I heard about this assignment, I knew what to say about it. Weblogs are fun to write about things in the news and you also get to have fun with IDIOMS. We do assignments and when we come back we write down our homework on our weblogs. Weblogs are a great experience for people to learn and get better at writing. Do you like to write LOOONNNGGG stories? Weblogs are good for sharing information you learn about in the news or in schools and libraries.When we come to Mrs. Davis’s class, we have discussion going on in the room and we think of things that are really important in the news or whats happening in schools. You can learn from other people if they have weblogs. “It’s the newspaper of the internet.”

Now what do you think about weblogs?

Yoceline shares her weblog with her uncle…..

What do you think about weblogs? I think they are great. You can just have your own web where you can write your own ideas. I love weblogs. I have my own weblog and I really enjoy it. I hope I can have a weblog next year. Do you have a weblog?

Weblogs helps people with their vocabulary. It also helps you express yourself. I share my writing with my uncle. He thought it was great.

Emily is “all ears”…..

Once I heard this assignment, my response was on the double! I absolutely LOVE WEBLOGS!!! The webloging experience for everyone is so great for education subjects, or of course to share your feelings. Ms. Davis’ group allows me to really express my feelings about the subjects on the news and my side of the story. You might think that you can just write it down on paper and have the same effect. If you have a weblog though, you can write AND get a response from other viewers.

What do we do in weblogs? In the weblog group, we start off the day by meeting together and taking up our homework. Our homework is usually writing a story off a report from a news site and making a really thought-provoking question at the end. Next we talk about what our day plan is, and go off to the computer lab to go weblogging!!! YAY!!!

We usually start of by typing our homework, and then responding to our responses of our posts. Many people out in the world just can not even imagine what it feels like to get an uplifting response to our stories!!! After our cheers from our responses, we find a new report that we enjoy reading about on some interesting news sites for our homework.

After all of this, at 10:30 (sometimes longer), our time is up and we pack up our stuff, and go back to our classrooms. I really wish our day was longer, so our class can keep on learning!

Remember Ms. Davis, I am all ears!!!

Jennifer tells me she is “tickled pink about weblogs”…..

I was on the ball the first time Mrs. Davis gave an assignment to the class. I am glad I get to have this experience again. This will help me learn new skills in writing good descriptive paragraphs and techniques to narrate stories better. I am very delighted that I get comments from friends, family, and from other people as well. What do we do in our weblog group you ask? Well first off, Mrs. Davis gives an assignment the week before. Then we come in and discuss what is on the agenda that day. Next we go to the computer lab and find an article. These are a few steps WE do to start writing:

1 Read your article.

2 Take a high-lighter and mark the important parts.

3 Think about the article.

4 Tell someone what you are reading about.

5 Think about descriptive words to make you writing interesting.

6 Be sure the who, what, when, where, and, why are included.

7 Make sure the lead of the article is catchy.

8 Write your article.

9 Think of a catchy title.

10. Read article outloud to yourself.

11 Proof article yourself.

12 Ask someone else to proof it.

13 Make corrections to make it better.

14 Reread it one more time!

We do this for about an two hours.(8:30-10:30) I really hope students and teachers will get inspired and follow our footsteps from the beginning to the end!


Blogs at Maricopa

Thursday, February 5th, 2004

EduResource Weblog - Higher Education Resources Online says “blogging is alive and well at Maricopa” by pointing to a post on Cogdogblog.

A couple caught my interest, but there are several others he noted. Alan wrote this about Alisa Cooper’s class. 

Alice Cooper has had her students use weblogs for projects and writing over the past few semesters. “I use a blog (iBlog for the Mac) in my hybrid freshman composition course as an interactive tool to keep students informed about what is going on in class. It is organized into five sections: FAQ, Assignments, Computers, Final Essay, and Lectures. All blog entries have options for students to send me feedback via email or post comments about the blog post for all to read. The blog has a calendar, RSS feed option, hit counter, and weekly polls.

I make blogs a requirement for students in my first year composition course and developmental writing courses. We use Blogger.com, a free web based blogger utility for these courses. Students use the blog as their writing journal. They respond to writing prompts three times a week. The blogs are public, and students are encouraged to read other students’ journals/blogs. ” Some samples:
English 101
English 071

Alan also has an Art Faculty using a blog for his students to create photoblogs at Buzznet.  It’s called Testing the Waters.  Check this out as well as the others.  I’d say blogs are a buzzing at Maricopa and I suspect much credit should go to Alan!


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